There are things to improve but overall it’s a nice read. The amount of lightness and heaviness is well-balanced, that’s what I think. The ending is sooo satisfying. It’s happy and heart-warming.
My only concern is why did the ex got his own man? And to think that they’re quite compatible with their sadistic character. Haha.
The man the ex got is a sadist rapist/blackmailer who drugged him, raped him and took photos, then started blackmailing him into a relationship by becoming his "personal bodyguard". Yeah, he deserves a "lover" like that
There are things to improve but overall it’s a nice read. The amount of lightness and heaviness is well-balanced, that’s what I think. The ending is sooo satisfying. It’s happy and heart-warming.
My only concern is why did the ex got his own man? And to think that they’re quite compatible with their sadistic character. Haha.