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Whether it's meant to be like that or not, isn't it bad writing to leave readers so confused though? Of course I could just be more stupid than the average reader, but usually in stories where it's supposed to come together as you read it, it at least gives off that sense and is comprehensive with what's given, but I don't really get that from this one it just feels like poor execution
I'm reading it (caught up at ch 3) but I don't understand at all it's so disconnected in my opinion and the dialogue doesn't flow enough for the story to come together... the basic idea is there sure but it lacks substance imo :/