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Suisalty November 17, 2020 1:39 am

I'm reading it (caught up at ch 3) but I don't understand at all it's so disconnected in my opinion and the dialogue doesn't flow enough for the story to come together... the basic idea is there sure but it lacks substance imo :/

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    LaLa November 17, 2020 3:06 am

    The story is meant to be like that...the pieces come together as you read...whether it will turn out to actually be a good story in the end we'll see

    Suisalty November 17, 2020 5:06 am
    The story is meant to be like that...the pieces come together as you read...whether it will turn out to actually be a good story in the end we'll see LaLa

    Whether it's meant to be like that or not, isn't it bad writing to leave readers so confused though? Of course I could just be more stupid than the average reader, but usually in stories where it's supposed to come together as you read it, it at least gives off that sense and is comprehensive with what's given, but I don't really get that from this one it just feels like poor execution

    Silth November 17, 2020 11:35 pm
    Whether it's meant to be like that or not, isn't it bad writing to leave readers so confused though? Of course I could just be more stupid than the average reader, but usually in stories where it's supposed to ... Suisalty

    If it's a bad writing it'll depend on how the story develops and on the finale. I'm also pretty confused, but if the author will add what is missing in the next chapters then it's ok

    LaLa November 18, 2020 12:40 am
    Whether it's meant to be like that or not, isn't it bad writing to leave readers so confused though? Of course I could just be more stupid than the average reader, but usually in stories where it's supposed to ... Suisalty