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1000000% agree. I started off liking this but now it's just terrible. At least in other stories the men aren't literal piles of trash that go after children and most of the time the FL has a way to fight back
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1000000% agree. I started off liking this but now it's just terrible. At least in other stories the men aren't literal piles of trash that go after children and most of the time the FL has a way to fight back
There is no reason the girl should’ve been reincarnated/reborn into this world as a 13 year old when all of her suitors have been either in their 20s, 50s, 1,500s, and 3,000s. There is also no reason that the original girl who died should have only been 17. What is the point of making her body of a child’s and of her mentality as a teenagers when this whole story is about the girl being courted by and constantly needing to run away from old ass men?
To make things fair the girl should’ve died of old age in her old life (so she could have those years of maturity) and been reborn as someone in her twenties (the age immortals in this world look as if they are in). Also, if the girl is gonna be too weak to stop these immortals from turning her into a play thing then either take out the existence of these immortals in the story, weaken their powers, or make the girl’s political authority so strong where these immortals can’t touch her. Although, like in this story, if all the main leads are obsessive manipulative trash then even the suggestions I made can’t save the story. But at least with my suggestions it wouldn’t feel as if we are constantly watching a young child being manipulated by old ass men. It would feel more like an even playing ground.