The one thing I'm sure of, is that I really want to slap the mc's mother silly. The way she talked to him and what she said to him makes it painfully obvious she's one of the greatest sources of his deep-seated insecurity. I can even bet the mc might have managed to get over that horrible experience if his mother didn't keep rubbing it in.
Sure go ahead, what stopping you. Words are meaningless if not converse into action. If not, you're just another bag of air. We got plenty around here parts.
Sure go ahead, what stopping you. Words are meaningless if not converse into action. If not, you're just another bag of air. We got plenty around here parts. LazyParrot
Sure go ahead, what stopping you. Words are meaningless if not converse into action. If not, you're just another bag of air. We got plenty around here parts. LazyParrot
Lol, let me guess. Are you perhaps coming from one of those "it's ____ (rape/abuse/bullying/etc)!" vs "it's fiction!" neverending debates? You kinda sound like you are.
I can smell the frustration. Stay away from those, if you can.
The one thing I'm sure of, is that I really want to slap the mc's mother silly. The way she talked to him and what she said to him makes it painfully obvious she's one of the greatest sources of his deep-seated insecurity. I can even bet the mc might have managed to get over that horrible experience if his mother didn't keep rubbing it in.