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Yeah, I totally agree. The scenes are just kind of there . . . I also read a lot of smut, and I, too, agree.
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Yeah, I totally agree. The scenes are just kind of there . . . I also read a lot of smut, and I, too, agree.
I've read a lot of smut and yaoi but this is kinda . . . eh
I'm kinda just uncomfortable and the xx scenes don't even feel sexy or sensual in anyway, just forced like they had to make sure this fell into the yaoi genre
I feel like this story would have been better suited to a more slow-burn romance and sexual tension style rather than the smut-yaoi feel that it's going for :