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riv November 1, 2020 8:59 pm

i like the smut and all, but i kinda feel like this would be better wihtout it. i feel like a shounen ai theme would fit better cause all the lightsabers feel a bit out of place. like some chapters make me cry and then theres just them having sex like-

Responses
    Blululu November 1, 2020 9:30 pm

    Right? I think it’s just timed really badly.

    Noi November 1, 2020 9:57 pm

    I think that it has sex bc the demons always wanted to have sex with the MC. Then they stopped once his soulmate did it with him.

    Yam November 1, 2020 11:12 pm

    I think it's okay? I mean currently, it's okay. Sex-wise, we haven't had that much smut from the MCs since this started. We only got teasers. It's been 31 chapters already and they just recently indulged each other. Besides the story so far, with the sex in it, hasn't gone off from the plot. And I think it's a bit inevitable now that it was revealed that Ryujin's a vessel where either an immortal or a demon can take over him. As cliche as it is, having a demon "take over your body" will, in one way or another, imply some sort of lust anyway. So I'd rather I see Imae and Ryujin's lightsabers than seeing Ryujin being molested by demons as they try to take over his body.

    riv November 2, 2020 12:33 am
    I think it's okay? I mean currently, it's okay. Sex-wise, we haven't had that much smut from the MCs since this started. We only got teasers. It's been 31 chapters already and they just recently indulged each o... Yam

    that's fair, and i agree with the last part, but i mean they couldve had the demons do something other than try to rape ryujimn when taking over his body. everything else was just in my opinion but i get where youre coming from.

    Babebladez November 2, 2020 4:10 am

    Eh there’s already too much shounen ai stories I’m glad it’s not that

    Babebladez November 2, 2020 4:10 am
    Eh there’s already too much shounen ai stories I’m glad it’s not that Babebladez

    *many

    Erga_omnes November 2, 2020 12:25 pm
    Eh there’s already too much shounen ai stories I’m glad it’s not that Babebladez

    Agreed