rushed ending

Noodle October 23, 2020 11:48 am

The ending feels rushed to me. It could have ended the same way but a little more satisfying, with a little more story telling. I mean in 28 pages it manages to jump like 5+ years into the future. The author could've written at least e few more chapters making the storytelling better and giving it more detail making the ending more satisfying.

Responses
    RED October 23, 2020 4:15 pm

    I hope there is a follow up....