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Probably because the creator is still new? That's my guess anyways. Since stories that feel stiff, awkward and the like tend to be because of their amateurity, little experience and still starting out as a new publisher? Idk the right words but thats what I think. Might be wrong at all/some points though
Why does everything in this story feel so stiff and awkward... they talk like they’re coworkers not best friends who have known each other for years.