hi hi, towards the bad points you have made, i do want to remind that the world is different than ours, so their past is different as well as how they receive ingredients and what not. it is possible that they have all that available to them while we did not before. same with technological advances, we dont know that worlds history so we cant really criticize them for having ovens like ours
piriodt.
thats so true. it is a complitly different world. who are we to judge their progress ╮(￣▽￣)╭
True but I believe it should be pointed out in a way. You know, if the world is magical then you can't be satisfied with only a sentence about it. But it's artists choice ╮(￣▽￣)╭
valid! i hope they expand upon the world properly because worlds with magic can be so interesting
Good
- Art is fine
- I like the MC but she needs some more details so I can fully cheer on her, feels slightly basic now.
- I like how MC is shown to have some hobbies to her personality
- I like how her brothers each have their own personality
- I like the similarities between her two lives
Bad
- typical (and basic) storyline when MC is abused
- there's magic in their world and they only mention it once
- just because someone knows how to cook in 2020 doesn't mean they would get adjusted to cooking in different timeline so soon, and how are there modern ovens there??
- dishes need ingredients, and most ingredients we have now were not available in the past, so her just deciding to cook without checking all ingredients are present makes me cringe
5/10