So... bad... can't... stop...

Vort October 18, 2020 8:13 am

The writing on this is almost insultingly bad, and yet I keep reading. It's like when a drunk person tells you a story, it's a terribly told story, disjointed and most doesn't make any sense, but it can still be interesting and you want to know how it ends. That's this. Bad but I still want to know how it ends.

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    Randomreader October 18, 2020 9:31 am

    Idk I won’t say I agree but I don’t disagree yk?? But the beginning of this story was rlly good I feel like we’re getting teased with the new arcs and unnecessary chapters

    Randomreader October 18, 2020 9:32 am

    I still love it in a way

    Mia October 18, 2020 10:31 am

    Did you read the novel? I find it more... unified? Simply better, the manga doesnt do a justice to the novel

    YAOI JUNKIE October 18, 2020 1:37 pm
    Did you read the novel? I find it more... unified? Simply better, the manga doesnt do a justice to the novel Mia

    this is like saying the manga didn't do any justice to the manga

    Randomreader October 19, 2020 1:09 am
    this is like saying the manga didn't do any justice to the manga YAOI JUNKIE

    What??? You do know that there is a novel to this that’s came first. In the comment they said that the drawn version doesn’t portray things as well as the novel does

    Vort October 19, 2020 2:38 am
    Did you read the novel? I find it more... unified? Simply better, the manga doesnt do a justice to the novel Mia

    I did read the Light Novel for a while but it was so bad I just couldn't finish it. I don't want to give spoilers so I'll just say I think I read to around when he's 15-16ish.

    YAOI JUNKIE October 19, 2020 3:09 am
    What??? You do know that there is a novel to this that’s came first. In the comment they said that the drawn version doesn’t portray things as well as the novel does Randomreader

    shit sorry didn't realise my mistake it to say it's like how we often complain that the anime didn't do the manga justice ( even if the anime is good once you read the manga it's way better) or that the movie didn't do the book any justice

    Randomreader October 19, 2020 5:49 am
    shit sorry didn't realise my mistake it to say it's like how we often complain that the anime didn't do the manga justice ( even if the anime is good once you read the manga it's way better) or that the movie d... YAOI JUNKIE

    Yeah lol it’s fine I didn’t read the novel so I can’t judge on the compassion I just connected you didn’t know about the novel

    Mia October 20, 2020 11:44 am
    shit sorry didn't realise my mistake it to say it's like how we often complain that the anime didn't do the manga justice ( even if the anime is good once you read the manga it's way better) or that the movie d... YAOI JUNKIE

    Yeah, it's like that, at least for me. Everyone likes different things and I'm not saying that the novel is the best thing I read, but it portrays some things better than the manga. Like Sylvies "evolution" when she came to rescue Art from the collapsing dungeon. She looked way better in the novel and I can't understand why didn't they drawn her as she was described, but that just the minor details.

    Vort October 21, 2020 1:59 am
    Yeah, it's like that, at least for me. Everyone likes different things and I'm not saying that the novel is the best thing I read, but it portrays some things better than the manga. Like Sylvies "evolution" whe... Mia

    I would definitely agree that the LN does a better job on descriptions (as most novels do), however I still stand by my original point that the foundational writing is just generally sub-par... or maybe not even sub-par, but doesn't meet my high standards.