I love where it seems to be headed!

karossi October 14, 2020 8:03 am

At the moment I'm not a huge fan of our ML. Even though I get that from his POV he married a noble, probably stuck up lady, I still don't like his short fuse. Even if you think she's this or that to aggressively grab her and basically be like "were you fucking around" and without proof just ... doesn't sit right with me. There's actually a few things that don't. His knights as well(ik why they dont like her but cmon). Can't even keep them in line from disrespecting her. They don't Have to like her but she is still his partner and The Lady.


He IS becoming softer though as their little misunderstandings clear up so I just hope he relaxes a bit and Max gains confidence along the way. She's adorable and honestly the only way for her from here is up so climb along bby girl

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    North Hype October 14, 2020 10:14 am

    there’s a reason why he was pretty annoyed with her and there is a reason as to why his knights dislike her and it’s all bc of that atrocious fuckn “family” of hers.

    karossi October 14, 2020 6:08 pm

    Yes, i know! The knights don't like her bc of her dad sending them off to war. He's wary of her bc of her family reputation.

    Doesn't change he has a short fuse, with anyone really, and he needs to learn some ~patience~ . I especially think he needs to learn patience because of our girls constitution. She's already traumatized enough (ofc he doesn't know this but you dont need a reason to not lash out at every little thing)

    The story is cute, but i do think people are quick to look past his own faults as a character simply bc he's a handsome, steamy dude haha but clearly he's not a bad guy and the only way for him is ALSO up so join Max in the climbing ╥﹏╥