..... why does she look like some ‘reluctant to leave’ maiden while she ran from graha...

EnaLikesThis October 13, 2020 2:53 am

..... why does she look like some ‘reluctant to leave’ maiden while she ran from graham? I really dont like how she knows there’s rumors of her cheating, and she’s outright gazing into Graham’s eyes and being even more of a slut people think she is. She just doesn’t feel... alive. And obviously Shannon was gonna spread rumors, that’s why she should have stayed to accuse Shannon. It made no sense why she didnt. Because Shannon is too popular? I mean, she was popular herself but that didn’t stop other nobles from spreading rumors. And she could have just told Aaron (Haron now apparently), that Shannon was doing things to her. Unless, this is just some underlying plot for the author to make Aaron evil or something. This plot can barely hold itself together, the art is okay i guess, the author is trying to make Aaron look like a manipulative guy when him being an adorable loyal man was better, the main character crying on Grahams lap like a poor ol’ prostitute, and the ‘villainous’ Shannon who was somehow able to convince stupid nobles about adultery when the frickn Viscount guy WASN’T EVEN IN THE FRICKN ROOM WHEN THEY OPENED THE DOOR!!!! LIKE i though they were gonna be like “o hoho! The two love birds are at it again” when they see the MC and Aaron, but NOOOOO they go, “there’s a girl hugging her fiancé. ShE mUsT hAvE BeEn In hErE wItH ThaT OnE GuY wHo ShE wAs wAlKiNg WitH even though we obviously see her with her fiancé.” Like WTF? When did they even see that rape attempter?? They just fucking opened the door and they think IMMEDIATELY that she was opening her leg to the guy who is halfway to the palace prison because some ugly tramp said so? And that Grahams sister! She literally threatens the MC that if she doesn’t do what she wants, then she MIGHT do something to make it worse. And one second later THE FUCKING MC THANKS THAT LITTLE SHIT FOR SAYING A FEW WORDS WHICH WERE OBVIOUS SAD BECAUSE THE LADY SAW HER!!!

This fucking story is messed up and the only thing that is keeping me here is that Nine looking male lead (hopefully he ISNT some manipulative dude. I hope they dont make it so that we think he is evil and then they just say that is was a muisunderstanding) and that adorable prince. I dont usually have a thing for the blondies in these kinda stories, but he’s hella adorable and precious and hopefully he isn’t evil too.

Responses
    666titania October 13, 2020 2:44 pm

    You've sounded like Melissa from Beware of Villainess out there XD.

    EnaLikesThis October 13, 2020 4:38 pm
    You've sounded like Melissa from Beware of Villainess out there XD. 666titania

    Ohohoho! Thank you! I also want my own pair of Nine and Yuri

    slap my salami October 14, 2020 1:41 am

    Welcome to Bad Writing Land, friend.