*your not giving criticism
No need to spread the toxicity, it's already there ╮ (￣ ▽ ￣) ╭ lol. more seriously, I think people have a right to have negative opinions on the consistency of the story. it is not a question of reality, because the yaoi is a fiction but of coherence. The script and the development of the characters is not consistent with the sudden rape. I think we have to distinguish between having a negative and reasoned opinion and showing hatred. The reader is there to criticize if they think something is wrong. It would be counterproductive to think that we have no right to criticize a work.
Yes i do think they have the right to have negative opinions but some of the comments I've seen, there just really mean TvT
oh please with the literary critique.
Let me guess. You're one of the rape haters back with a different approach since your first volley of bullshh didn't work. It's just more negative sht, and you're still just acting the same except now you've all adopted this "everyone has a right to their negative opinions" garbage whenever you encounter opposition to your nastiness. You're all incorporating the word, hate, too, like you thought up some disorganized, half-baked arguments where you can work it in.
How bout all of you just sticking it?
*stick it
I don't understand what you're talking about. And don't project YOUR meanness on me since I didn't say anything mean or give negative comments for this story. You mix everything up.
it's up to you to stick to that.
Luv.Yaoi makes a perfect, succinct, well-worded statement, which ought to be appreciated. For my part I'm sorry your post got jumped all over.
Eliza76 first, the reader is not there to criticize. He's there to be delighted and entertained. If you're reading with an eye toward criticism, you're not getting your money's worth.
Second, this is wrong, You said "The script and the development of the characters is not consistent with the sudden rape."
The author built up to the rape in seven fully played scenes, not small exchanges, though there were those, but full scenes developed over 5 chapters. That isn't sudden by any writer's standards.
This story has its flaws, but the build-up to the CH5 event isn't one of them.
If you don't like the story then leave, since your just going to spread toxicity again, if you don't like the art and you don't like the story then try making a story of your own since from what I've seen your giving criticism your just being mean