They are even older, with their past and current lives they are already 23 inside, it’s just absurd, the author doesn’t know how to handle that plot, they should have just being kids to begin with (with no past life) and then their actions would have made so much more sense, the reincarnation plot is not being used anyway, so what was the point? To just follow the reincarnation trend because it's popular now so that author wanted to attract that readers?
If you are going to add something to the story at least commit to it, if don’t, than please, just don’t use it ;;;;;
This story had a lot pf potential, maybe that’s why I’m so disappointed now
Fully agree! Evry statement is on point
I was very excited to delve deeper into this one but unfortunately the potential it had is now gone. I find the twins very contradictory, and not in a good way. I mean no disrespect if you actually like them and this story, but it just doesn't make sense.
At this point the reincarnation aspect isn't explored and elaborated upon. I feel as though it is just a plot device to make them a little more intelligent or emotionally aware of themselves. But even there it falls short. Yes, we don't know their past life- because it has not been fleshed out- so they could've had a shit life then too. But if they did have a shit past life they could at least use their experience to build themselves up.
Many of the comments are mad at the King for not wanting them but would you want to be in his situation? He was bound by a spell type thing and was forced to have children from a woman he didn't love and was dangling his life in front of his face. The King has more to live for than just his own life, but for his 3 sons and a whole kingdom. I think he had to distance himself. But he is trying to open up now, so...
Im taking in mind that they are victims of child abuse, why don't they trust their father. The cant trust their father but they can trust some random man and his child. Why? Because they are nice to them? Or because Arien fancy this child(that in and of itself is odd because they are about 17 mentally)? In my own experience with childhood abuse, trust isn't something that you selectively give. If trust and betrayal is big to them they wouldn't believe in anyone but themselves.
Like I said earlier im gonna drop this, I might come back to it once their are more chapters, but until then I hope you guys enjoy. ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶