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I accidentally down-voted your comment. Sorry....
i actually read it for the first time after a while and the story is perfectly paced! it may be because uploads are very infrequent. you should try reading it like i did (▰˘◡˘▰)
This story has so much potential but they are dragging it out. Maybe it feels longer cuz we read it as a kind person uploads but it feel extremely dragged out.