Yeah the art is amazing but the storytelling Iam sorry you tried too hard it far way too stretched
Idk if it gets better but I can't read it it way way to much for me no hate (=・ω・=)
Can you recommend me a cute bl to read please ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶
Glad I'm not the only one who thinks like that (￣∇￣")
And recommendations... Uhmmm I can't think of any right now and I'm too lazy to go through my read list now orz
But... I've created a couple of lists with manga/comics that I've liked, you can go through them and see if there's something that catches your interest (:
Wow I will be sure to check it out thanks (≧∀≦)
Uhmmm... Well honestly, the story looks like it was made up by a 11 year old trying to write a romantic fanfic. And I'm being considerate!
I can't even explain the levels of cringe I felt while reading this comic. Really, this artist should join with a writer, because drawing is his/her talent, not storytelling.
Not a single twist was finished nor explained. The cheating, the time travel, the bar, the MC's family issues. Nothing.
And everything is too simple and sudden. One chapter they are at school, the next they bought a bar and are the owners, the gangster who fell for MC suddenly disappeared, the personality of the MC also changed drastically. One they are talking about acting and *bang* he's scouted and suddenly he's an expert at acting even to judge and give an audition to green haired guy (who also suddenly disappeared) and since when was becoming an actor his long-lived dream? Did I miss something?
Well... To sum up, the art is good, the storytelling is... Not