The story in a whole was good I guess. Although, there were too many plot twists and new problems that kept rising and at that point I was just like omg give the characters and readers a break lol Bronte was a strong character but sometimes she was just too naive and innocent. I didn’t see much character development with the characters either so that’s that. And honestly, as much as Mars wanted that hotel, I don’t think he needed to go through all that trouble and suffering from Mischief like that. Instead, he could’ve worked harder and tried establishing his own domain rather than following the same path over and over again...T-T
The story in a whole was good I guess. Although, there were too many plot twists and new problems that kept rising and at that point I was just like omg give the characters and readers a break lol Bronte was a strong character but sometimes she was just too naive and innocent. I didn’t see much character development with the characters either so that’s that. And honestly, as much as Mars wanted that hotel, I don’t think he needed to go through all that trouble and suffering from Mischief like that. Instead, he could’ve worked harder and tried establishing his own domain rather than following the same path over and over again...T-T