It was sweet and all, but the translation was very confusing and probably off the mark, (e...

3BLOOM September 27, 2020 8:38 pm

It was sweet and all, but the translation was very confusing and probably off the mark, (especially when they had sex 'for the first time') and the uploader seems to be imitating renta, I couldn't find any other translations of this manga either. As far as I know, an officially translated manga will not still have the jp sound effects. Not trying to critisize, just don't know why nobody's talking about this. _(┐「ε:)_

Responses
    Amorim September 27, 2020 9:36 pm

    I’m legitimately so lost. Everything made effect sense to me?? What was confusing about their first time??

    staytrashy September 27, 2020 10:06 pm

    “the uploader seems to be imitating renta” haha it IS from renta. In the beginning and end of every chapter you’ll see the disclaimer on the credit pages that says it was bought from English renta and to support the mangaka there!! Meaning it is the official English translation!! But haha I have noticed that lately renta translators/cleaners are leaving in tricky SFX the cowards ( ̄∇ ̄")

    staytrashy September 27, 2020 10:12 pm

    Here is the official English Renta link (same link at the end of every chapter on the credit page)!! (●'◡'●)ノ https://www.ebookrenta.com/renta/sc/frm/item/141651/

    3BLOOM September 28, 2020 12:19 am

    Ok my bad I had only looked up the japanese name, but if you're talking about their first time, they did it at the end of ch 4 and had their 'first time' in ch 5, along with a few other smaller confusing things.

    3BLOOM September 28, 2020 12:23 am
    “the uploader seems to be imitating renta” haha it IS from renta. In the beginning and end of every chapter you’ll see the disclaimer on the credit pages that says it was bought from English renta and to ... staytrashy

    forgot to @ u

    3BLOOM September 28, 2020 12:24 am
    I’m legitimately so lost. Everything made effect sense to me?? What was confusing about their first time?? Amorim

    @

    pinetr3e September 28, 2020 12:46 am
    Ok my bad I had only looked up the japanese name, but if you're talking about their first time, they did it at the end of ch 4 and had their 'first time' in ch 5, along with a few other smaller confusing things... 3BLOOM

    I agree it was totally confusing, i thought they had done it too but if you look closely i think he only puts the tip in or just masturbates close to Makoto's butt.

    staytrashy September 28, 2020 12:55 am
    forgot to @ u 3BLOOM

    I totally agree, there were at some points that the translation was wonky, but I think they didn’t actually do it in chapter 4?? I think it was just rubbing or maybe just the tip??? Because of the censoring it was so hard to tell and I was so confused at first as well lol, but haha definitely there were a few points I thought a better word could be used in the translations or it felt like someone said something kinda out of character because of how a sentence was worded

    Amorim September 28, 2020 1:57 am
    I totally agree, there were at some points that the translation was wonky, but I think they didn’t actually do it in chapter 4?? I think it was just rubbing or maybe just the tip??? Because of the censoring ... staytrashy

    Yeah he never put it in. I didn’t find it that confusing but maybe that’s because I’m a pervert and definitely went scene by scene. Oopsie.