I feel like it would be much more realistic and better for the development of the story if they made the time before the rebellion longer. The queen would be able to regain a better connection with her subjects she wrongfully imprisoned, rebuilt trust with black hair boy, and just more backstory with every character in general. The story just feels super rushes and no matter how competent your subjects are it’s quite unrealistic to do it all in a day. And where are the challenges the mc faces when being transported into a whole new world with a full plate on her hands? Don’t get me wrong, it’s still an interesting read but it isn’t at its full potential.
I feel like it would be much more realistic and better for the development of the story if they made the time before the rebellion longer. The queen would be able to regain a better connection with her subjects she wrongfully imprisoned, rebuilt trust with black hair boy, and just more backstory with every character in general. The story just feels super rushes and no matter how competent your subjects are it’s quite unrealistic to do it all in a day. And where are the challenges the mc faces when being transported into a whole new world with a full plate on her hands? Don’t get me wrong, it’s still an interesting read but it isn’t at its full potential.