I felt that too!!!! It just felt all unnecessary and just lacking any coherence
I would have to agree with this, the whole plot flow is making me feel cringey
I am not sure why it was moving like this but I am not seeing any character development at all
I feel like they really only planned out the romance aspect of the story and then the publishing house the author is in said : "Need more chapters! More story!Now!" and the author didn't spend as much time with the final act of the story.
which is sad, this could have been promising if they actually plan and plot more into the political views and made the MC more witty and wise. I am not feeling much of those in the series since she is weak and pretty much a push over? am I the only one feeling that? hope not.
I think her personality is quite fitting for the story to be honest, as annoying as it can get. It's very believable for Vasser to write books like these based on her personality and situation. I think if she was more witty and wise then it wouldn't make sense that she made errors in her writing. but that's just my take.
Honestly, this comic's writing turned bad in the last third of chapters. As soon as the two leads got together, the story line thinned out and characters started acting unreasonable or lost their communication skills for the sake of badly written drama.