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Blusha September 4, 2020 11:12 pm

Je ne comprend pas le plot. I aint gon let my coworker sleep and eat in my house without paying rent just monitor my ass. Sorry but it is not a good plot. Do better author, I know you are better than this.

Responses
    Turnip September 5, 2020 12:16 am

    I agree the plot isn't really impressive at all, but really yaoi smut isn't all that well known for good plot
    Typically, what little "plot" there is is just a method of packing in new kinky situations
    There are ofc some exceptions to this trend, but they are just exceptions and not the status quo
    (All just based on my experience and opinion)

    heartily September 5, 2020 12:48 am

    It's just porn anyways. It's just some material for masturbating so it doesn't matter. There are a lot of good yaoi and shounen ai with good plots out there.

    Blusha September 5, 2020 1:19 am
    It's just porn anyways. It's just some material for masturbating so it doesn't matter. There are a lot of good yaoi and shounen ai with good plots out there. heartily

    Mm I guess so, I actually don't read it for personal entertainment but for anatomy and just drawing in general so I was hoping to see good plot line, proportions and good line work. Maybe I'm too picky cuz I draw haha.

    Blusha September 5, 2020 1:21 am
    I agree the plot isn't really impressive at all, but really yaoi smut isn't all that well known for good plotTypically, what little "plot" there is is just a method of packing in new kinky situationsThere are o... Turnip

    I see, I learn a new thing everyday. I hope that good plots in yaoi smut continue to exist and extend this trend.

    Turnip September 5, 2020 1:47 am
    I see, I learn a new thing everyday. I hope that good plots in yaoi smut continue to exist and extend this trend. Blusha

    I also like to draw and love using yaoi for reference! (Particularly cuz I struggle with drawing male figures)
    But if I'm being honest, I definitely prefer reading the Boys Love genre, as it is typically more oriented towards romance and story than just smut (but it can still contain quite a few steamy scenes of course lol)
    Honestly, I mostly like that BL generally portrays healthier relationships XP