NO! is it just me or did this feel like ehhhh. Like character development just wasn't ther...

hypocritical_kitten August 31, 2020 6:53 pm

NO! is it just me or did this feel like ehhhh. Like character development just wasn't there for Miharu, he was a person who helped people (mostly by doing sexy stuff ┑( ̄Д  ̄)┍ ) and no change, like he just realised that Daiki deserved some love, like wth. We all know that he kept shutting off Daiki to cause he was cautious but it felt like just a 2 pages to realise it and get rid of years of anxiety and issues with love is just not that great Σ(っ°Д °;)っ it was not like that had a bond developing between them in the chapters before (their relationship wasn't even showcased alot)

On the other hand, Daiki had alot of character development (yay!), he went to become more understanding, tolerant, and loving guy (he was already loving tho).

Not complaining about the pairing, but it just fell a lil short to me.

Responses
    Yaya August 31, 2020 6:57 pm

    Yahhhh same here tbh- I felt it was REALLY rushed. Maybe it would be good if there werent so many short stories and it was more focused on the two of them, or if the 8th chapter didnt end with them confessing their love (well, maybe daiki).

    If Miharu was ok with opening up for daiki and thus, letting his feelings slowly become love after like 3 more chapters, that would be fine by me, but this felt so weird... I couldnt wrap my head around it tbh haha

    blueninja89 August 31, 2020 7:38 pm

    I get the author’s intention but it’s a very shallow plot and honestly unsympathetic characters who’ve realized their mistakes but continue to make them over and over again only to pity themselves as if they’re martyrs for a cause.

    hypocritical_kitten September 1, 2020 3:29 am
    Yahhhh same here tbh- I felt it was REALLY rushed. Maybe it would be good if there werent so many short stories and it was more focused on the two of them, or if the 8th chapter didnt end with them confessing t... Yaya

    So true ヽ(`Д´)ノ

    hypocritical_kitten September 1, 2020 3:30 am
    I get the author’s intention but it’s a very shallow plot and honestly unsympathetic characters who’ve realized their mistakes but continue to make them over and over again only to pity themselves as if t... blueninja89

    Omg yasssss. You put it in such good words.