Well that was disappointing....this could be fleshed out so much better especially if it was longer. The ending just doesn't sit right. I kinda wish this was straight smut, throw out this crappy plot, and just give me a threesome or 2 some cus the way they developed was meh.It felt like a 2 hour movie condensed into 30minutes with the ppl writing it the same ones behind twilight.
Well that was disappointing....this could be fleshed out so much better especially if it was longer. The ending just doesn't sit right. I kinda wish this was straight smut, throw out this crappy plot, and just give me a threesome or 2 some cus the way they developed was meh.It felt like a 2 hour movie condensed into 30minutes with the ppl writing it the same ones behind twilight.