The ending is too abrupt. I feel like the the author... a. lost interest in it and wanted...

Heather August 23, 2020 3:32 am

The ending is too abrupt.
I feel like the the author...
a. lost interest in it and wanted to end it as quickly as possible.
b. weren't interested in delving into corporate bureaucracy. so, just skipped it all and focused on the romance/
relationship aspect.
c. couldn't continue due to unprofitability.

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    Heather August 23, 2020 3:36 am

    Their relationship was also bland, sadly. Mostly because the author really didn't put too much effort into actually developing it outside of their sex life and conflicts. They had a good enough idea, it's just that it wasn't executed well... :(