what a fucken shit show

sins lover August 20, 2020 4:06 am

This...I dont even know wear to begin...... holy fuck trying to get through this dumb fuck reading was like walking through thorn bushes in the middle of the night. I can understand some misshaps here and there, but my fucken god! I got a migraine just trying to figure out just what the fuck anyone was saying at any given time! The plots didn't help either. What a fucken nightmare! the second story was the ONLY FUKEN PEACE that had anything interesting about it with a healthy heaping of fluffy love to it! If only it weren't a one shot. I would love to dig into that plot with his past, and then flush it all out with a clearer understanding of just how our good and honest man saved him from himself. I'm mean there was so much potential in it! Fuck this shit, I'm done.....good bye...I'm going to find something to cleanse both my mind and eyes with now.

Responses
    shhiluvyoai August 22, 2020 2:17 am

    You forgot while naked.

    Story 1 and 2 could had been so much better if not so rushed thru and what the hell. Chapter 5 coulda just been tossed all together it was bad but where did it really fit

    sins lover August 22, 2020 4:03 am

    whoops, my bad! And I completely agree with you. This could almost passed as a bad "trip", if you know what I mean, and even then, it all could've gone better. Just piss poor everything down to the translation. Its like they were made for echother. I hope that made sense...it did in my head

    shhiluvyoai August 22, 2020 4:19 am

    I get what ya saying. I have a bad habit when I am reading anyhow of correcting mistakes in the translations to make em sound better in my head. I feel so bad for some the teams doing this I'm like I wish I had some way of helping ya out

    Jayn January 22, 2021 10:53 am

    Totally !!!
    I lost braincells reading this manga