Hot but not

Ankh August 19, 2020 6:32 am

Both seme and uke very pleasing to the eye... And yet I have issues shipping them in the present setting. No matter what, they are still boss/intern and it doesn't feel right. Too rushed and unsubstantiated. Author chan could take a little bit more time developing their relationship, rather than having the clean cut boss giving his intern hot kisses here and there. Don't get me wrong, I'm all for smut. But smut without substance doesn't feel as good to me. A bit of conflicting character development here imo. Can't imagine the boss going so fast in such a short time. But then again that's what top yaoi plots are distingsghed from weaker once. The art is great. A pity.

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    gvuni August 19, 2020 8:14 am

    Agree, the point from no feelings to apparently uncontrollable attraction gave me whiplash.