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I think it feels that way partly because it's actually a sequel to the brother and omi's story. I haven't read their story yet but I feel it willl probably give more understanding of the world in that one. But I also do feel that things could have been written a bit better in this one too.
It's cute... Kinda....
The idea is good, original and interesting, but I feel the author had a lot of ideas and wanted to put them all together at once... So we ended with this strange pace... I feel like the story is all over the place