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Well if you stretched the stiry it wouldnt turn out like this. Author would take a lot more time before they like each other and date. Having a well developed plot in a short story ain't easy i guess.
Yes I do agree, its so hard to create a good answer to the plot of this one since its a short story but ironically the start was already complicated
The uke might like the seme's looks and being mysterious, but I don't think a sane person would easily commit to someone by doing it and meaning it as love making when in fact he first saw the seme getting a rushed quickie in an empty classroom. It might be because its a freaking one shot but the uke didn't think that seme has the tendency to cheat when reasons are not given why he would let another man suck his d and have sex without any strings attached. Like ugh, this is still a big drama if you stretch the story ┑(￣Д ￣)┍