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Hmm I guess it's a little rushed now you point it out, but I could barely notice when reading.
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Hmm I guess it's a little rushed now you point it out, but I could barely notice when reading.
It's all over the place. Is it because of the translation because the sentences are too short or the random cuts which are making the story progress way to fast. ┑(￣Д ￣)┍