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It is similar in the raws. And I prefer the raws. Maybe when the fan translation group uploads theirs. You guys can give it a read. There are parts the same and others completely different. The version in the main section is from Tapas and their verison is localization and westernized Of the real story: which is not a good or bad thing. It is just different.
Is it just me or is the dialogue really good? The interaction between uke and seme is fluid and funny. Usually I find yaoi dialogue bland unless it's moved along by the plot but this shit is preeetty sweet ლ(´ڡ`ლ)