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Talkinglens August 2, 2020 5:19 pm

I really liked the story but it seems to have quite a few plot holes? I don't know if it's like that originally or I wasn't paying enough attention

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    kiriseung August 9, 2020 3:19 pm

    no yea I def agree, there were a lot missing. The ending was a bit off

    Talkinglens August 9, 2020 3:24 pm
    no yea I def agree, there were a lot missing. The ending was a bit off kiriseung

    And it's nothing like The Tale of the Yellow Dragon, which is why I was wondering if this story had missing parts or something

    kiriseung August 9, 2020 3:41 pm
    And it's nothing like The Tale of the Yellow Dragon, which is why I was wondering if this story had missing parts or something Talkinglens

    Right!? Tale of the Yellow Dragon was so good, I feel like the artist and writer of both series has improved a lot through their work. (Since totyd came out after this one)

    Talkinglens August 9, 2020 8:34 pm
    Right!? Tale of the Yellow Dragon was so good, I feel like the artist and writer of both series has improved a lot through their work. (Since totyd came out after this one) kiriseung

    Oh I didn't know that, that makes sense! Maybe we will get a Paramour sequel