anyone interested?

interested~

I’m interested!! (๑•ㅂ•)و✧

its still my first ch huhu so im still thinking of continuing it or not however here's the sypnosis

"A college students with a strange mannerism like no one ever encountered before, what could be the reason for it? Also a peculiar student that appeared out of nowhere, will he bring him joy r despair like no other?"

Mannerism (possible title)

Chapter 1

7:30 A.M. alarm buzzes off, mc gets up

Schedule Board
7:30 - 8:00 = Bath and tidying up for school
8:00 - 8:30 = Breakfast
8:30 - 9:00 = Diary writing
9:00 - 10:00 = Leaving for school
10:30 - -:-- = Class

MC opened his diary and starts writing up

Mannerism is a habitual action or gesture that gives you distinction towards other people. However, for me it was a manifestation of what i felt in that moment. The deepest of despair like never before appeared before me. Perhaps,

“Was it too soon for me to experience the darkest void that keeps on corrupting me?”

Thus resulting to this strange mannerism of mine, i always pick with the dead skin besides my nails whenever i feel unloved, lost, and anxious.

"I know, pathetic isn’t it?"

It's like selling what you are currently feeling to the people around you, asking for pity and comfort. Nonetheless, I never needed any pity and comfort from other people. That's the reason why i never told anyone the reason behind it and why i slowly distance myself to others.

I’m neither a nerd nor a loner; i guess you could say i am your typical student. Yes, I’m average, i don’t do badly but i don’t do well also. I’m not popular amongst others but I have something that always catches other people’s eyes, my long hair. I guess it is not typical for a male to have such style, as we cannot avoid people having standards. But for me, I’m fine with it as long as I don’t bother them. As for the reason why I didn’t cut my hair, there’s a reason for it but today is not the day for it.

Anyways, yes, i distanced myself but i still interact and socialize to my classmates, weird right? It’s just that i kind of put some gap or limitations to the development of our relationships, thinking that i might, again, mistook their kindness for something else.

Gentle breeze of spring blows right into the windows
MC looks out of the window and suddenly noticed that its almost 9:00 A.M

Today, as i caress the pages of this diary while writing, i never noticed that a new chapter of my journey will begin and I hope this new page will create a lot of opportunities for me! Fighting!

-Park Yo Han
July 15, 2020 start of college life

heres my first ch huhu thank you for your thoughts!! very much appreciated!

I think the point in the "neither a nerd... and the next paragraph" got redundant (just mix it into one and get to the point) It's quite good and intriguing to where would ur plot go~ u may also want to consider which kind of audience u like to hook it to, like for the general, u may want to lessen the depth of ur words or what u just written which needs a more knowledgeable/wider vocab people. Anyways fighting and good job! Keep on writing ♡~♡

THANK YOU!! ill keep this in mind!