I liked this to a point, as it has an interesting plot, but too many things are left unexplained and there are too many holes. I think it's one of those stories that needs at least eight or ten chapters to really smooth out and become a complete story.
I liked this to a point, as it has an interesting plot, but too many things are left unexplained and there are too many holes. I think it's one of those stories that needs at least eight or ten chapters to really smooth out and become a complete story.