Huhu meant to like but it clicked unlike :(( aaaa
But honestly I agree, its such a trainwreck and the pyramid scheme felt a little disconnected to the plotline, im just kinda dry for having 131 chapters and all we get to see at the last chapter was none other than a short moment of hyun and joonsoo, I kind of want them to atleast be as doting to each other like minyul and joonsoo was. But it is such a great story, tho mentally exhausting to read.
Yep! They really dragged the drama here and the characters tend to blab on. If they cut the dialogue or thought bubbles, or even just the roundabout storytelling, I'm pretty sure this wouldve been 70-80 chapters at most.
Also, the scam was something to justify Hyun and Jungsoo's past. The author just stretched it too far because of all the push and pull going on. Basically, it made Hyun and Jungsoo's relationship subtly develop while erasing the charm of Yul (which tbh was an eyesore because it's the classic "hate this character so that this other is more likeable") the subplots tend to get lost as well because it delves on emotions too much, obnoxiously redundant if I might add.
no offense but what the fuck did i just read. i feel like i just spent the last year and a half reading it because every single mini-plot took fucking forever. also the pyramid scheme was so odd and out of place???? not to mention that literally every event and the feelings of every character were extremely vague. every time someone liked someone else, it was very obvious by the way they acted but it honestly felt fake and forced?? Like, yes, i see that you like this guy but I have no idea why because you two have no chemistry whatsoever.
The art was beautiful but like it was kind of a trainwreck, no offense to the author. I hope she makes another manwha because I'd love to read it, assuming she writes a plot that's a bit more clear and coherent.
tldr; the art is pretty, the characters are likable but somewhat unrealistic, but like wtf was that plot
sorry for the wall text you can go back to your regularly scheduled program :)