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Why do you think it's trying hard to be messed up? What direction do you think this situation could've gone?
in that case quit now because it gets SO much worse...(even i had to quit when i saw that ending, Yikes)
The story is messed up , but not the good type of messed up but the bad type of messed up. Idk, but i've seen better stories with messed up people that actually dosen't look like a try hard. This one tries so hard to be messed up, but im still going to read it to see where this is going. Im hoping to see some improvements!