Responses
EXACTLY!! Maybe it would have been nicer if the seme shows a different stronger reaction for the uke. I guess it lacks angst and desperation.
Yes!! We need some conflict, maybe one of his sex friends being annoying. Like a confrontation in which the uke will think that "I don't deserve him" or "They look much better together". Or we can have more fluff to show how deep their relationship is
It feels like only the tip went in and you're not fully satisfied.