This story is 75% sex, 20% Raymond confusedly pining over Kata, and 5% actual plot progres...

misaki July 6, 2020 2:08 am

This story is 75% sex, 20% Raymond confusedly pining over Kata, and 5% actual plot progression. The dialogue contained a lot of excessive whining. There wasn't a single female character in the whole story. Raymond was supposedly some genius researcher but literally all he did at work was have sex with Kata... instead of, you know, the important research that could have saved Kata a lot earlier. The beginning was intriguing but by the end I just wasn't feeling it anymore. It had a lot of potential but unfortunately fell flat.

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    Mai July 21, 2020 10:57 am

    So im gona read it for 75% sex

    misaki July 23, 2020 3:25 am
    So im gona read it for 75% sex Mai

    You do you lol. It's good sex, there's just a lot of it