Character Development

Tenpura July 3, 2020 7:10 am

As much as I love the Raven Ebony, I feel like she grew too quickly. She’s clearly not over her trauma, but she turned into a completely different person in a month...when she was mistreated for her whole life. Realistically, it doesn’t make sense to me because no one should be able to recover from trauma that quickly and rapidly changes their personality. Also, this is somewhat of an act she's putting on so we still don’t know the real ebony, and that kind of bothers me. But otherwise, I really like the story and how it’s going so far. That’s mainly the only criticism I have.

Responses
    Yuki~tan July 3, 2020 7:29 am

    I agree...since the change is so fast it feels unrealistic and somehow I recognize them as characters which I hate doing... though I love the story the plotline is great.

    xxx July 3, 2020 9:16 am

    I would like to chalk it up that she had unknown natural talent that bloomed.

    mercisha July 3, 2020 11:29 am
    I would like to chalk it up that she had unknown natural talent that bloomed. xxx

    Yep, it's just been stated she has the talent, just never utilised it.

    Shay July 3, 2020 1:33 pm

    The fact her identity is hidden could have helped. She may be different when she wears it and when she doesn't

    mercisha July 3, 2020 5:31 pm
    The fact her identity is hidden could have helped. She may be different when she wears it and when she doesn't Shay

    Oh shit that was stated too! Wearing the mask allows her to feel free. Able to do anything.

    Shay July 6, 2020 8:06 pm
    Oh shit that was stated too! Wearing the mask allows her to feel free. Able to do anything. mercisha

    Oh shit, I wasn't talking to you. No one cares about what a disrespectfull and arrogant person like you thinks.

    mercisha July 6, 2020 11:16 pm
    Oh shit, I wasn't talking to you. No one cares about what a disrespectfull and arrogant person like you thinks. Shay

    Wouldn't it be more disrespectful to insult a person out of the blue? Please, enlighten me as to what I've done to offend you. I, at least, have enough decency not to attack a person I don't know. Yikes. What's got your pants in a twist?

    Shay July 7, 2020 10:18 am

    There is many way to insult someone, one is the manner of speech. That is what you have done, I simply matched the way you speak to people you don't know, because you did it twice. Maybe you thought you could freely make fun of people that you believe are stupid, but said people have feelings you know and above all, not blind.

    mercisha July 7, 2020 12:19 pm
    There is many way to insult someone, one is the manner of speech. That is what you have done, I simply matched the way you speak to people you don't know, because you did it twice. Maybe you thought you could f... Shay

    What are you talking about point out when I'd made fun of anybody

    mercisha July 7, 2020 12:27 pm
    There is many way to insult someone, one is the manner of speech. That is what you have done, I simply matched the way you speak to people you don't know, because you did it twice. Maybe you thought you could f... Shay

    LMAO you thought I was being sarcastic? No no the tone must have come off wrong but I love this webtoon a lot, I genuinely enthusiastically meant "oh shit" and not in a condescending way. It clicked. I'm sure I've praised this webtoon somewhere. You've completely misconstrued my tone & that's fair and all, tone can be interpreted wrongly on the internet but there was really no need to personally attack me ESPECIALLY since there was a chance I wasn't trying to be an asshole. I'm not that petty. I only attack those who've wronged me personally this came out longer than intended but I hope I got my point across. You really had me confused

    Tenpura July 7, 2020 5:40 pm
    LMAO you thought I was being sarcastic? No no the tone must have come off wrong but I love this webtoon a lot, I genuinely enthusiastically meant "oh shit" and not in a condescending way. It clicked. I'm sure ... mercisha

    Yea I literally saw no problem with your comments. I thought you were genuinely surprised and enlightened by their comments.....

    mercisha July 7, 2020 5:49 pm
    Yea I literally saw no problem with your comments. I thought you were genuinely surprised and enlightened by their comments..... Tenpura

    I genuinely was!! Everything made sense then. I thought I'd said something sorta rude in another thread (I can't remember ever attacking anyone personally on this site but there you go) but then it'd make no sense to square up to me here where I'm just vibin, so I got defensive. I was so confused thanks for understanding