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err i did reread the story alot of time bc i like it. but ur opinion about the preducer is wrogn i think..think about u cant have a realationship over years without some feeling attached . and our lil hero is struggling with his feelings for a younger shorter guy . u would probally choose the safe-route at first too
Oh, the holes that there are in this story. In the very initial he talks about loving and pursuing Sawa and it shows a very business like sex-relationship with the producer, and later on it shows that he loves (or at least desires) the producer and Sawa becomes like a stranger that suddenly appeared? And the girl, first is a pet but later it hints a little more? I mean, what's up with the definition of this relationships? (You can even see that it's not a flaw in the character's personality, it really shows that sensei didn't think it through)