Dragged on way too long; good ending

zilpiy July 1, 2020 10:53 pm

I dropped reading this like 3 times but today I was determined to finish it. MY MISTAKE. The story dragged on way too long. Could have easily been wrapped up in 30 chapters MAX. I recommend just reading the first few chapters then skipping to 85 to save you the trouble. Its like CONSTANT miscommunication that frustrated me. The ending was good I am glad the other side characters did not make an appearance again. They were all horrible.

All of the characters were insufferable. Especially the sisters, they were annoying even until the last chapter. The family was also all annoying. The grand daughter was jealous of her own grand mother, never helped out and just caused trouble. The son was also annoying too. Every single family member was useless and selfish and only cared for the inheritance. So I am glad they are gone in the end, hopefully the kids are raised differently.

The FL was also way too stubborn. She could have let go of her pride a bit to just make the chemistry more believable, but these two leads didnt have any. Truly they did not have any chemistry whatsoever. It just felt forced and obligatory.. she had more chemistry with her childhood friend.

The last chapter I guess saved the story but overall this whole series it felt like a waste of time.The FL didnt get retribution for being mistreated at all. So ima say a waste of time to go through each chapter.. just skip through until the end.

Also to ppl saying its a slow burn.... yea a slow TORTURE OF NO PLOT DEVELOPMENT OR CHARACTER REDEMPTION. seriously the whole family all sucked I had to say this three times lol

Responses
    Hakdog August 25, 2020 9:21 am

    I read the first few chapters and felt that line lol so i skipped it to the last ch.

    Hakdog August 25, 2020 9:21 am
    I read the first few chapters and felt that line lol so i skipped it to the last ch. Hakdog

    *vibe