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I think the problem I'm having is that it feels like an incomplete thought. There is no focus. Also I don't think there is an issue in saying that it's shit.
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I think the problem I'm having is that it feels like an incomplete thought. There is no focus. Also I don't think there is an issue in saying that it's shit.
I really like the story, don't see why are you all complaining about plot holes in a fantasy-based isekai kinda story ╮(￣▽￣)╭