whats wrong with the art? it looks amazing already
it's pretty descent but it's still kinda low quality if you compare it with other similar mangas but I't's also because an artist so I have a tendencies of picking at things more harshly (Mind you, I am by NO means implying I'm freaking leonardo davinci either) something I'm particularly very OCD about (mainly cause I'm a fashion design mayor) is how stiff the fabric is drawn; another detail is how HARSH those "x" shaped laces on the front of their shirts look, notice how the lineart is not a fully opaque black? it's a dark shade of gray but not actually black which makes the finished product looks almost "misty" this is due to the lack of contrast so when you add those STRAIGHT black laces it throws off the whole balance. There's lots of other details but they're kinda hard for me to explain Mind you take this with a grain of salt this is truly just MY PERSONAL feelings and in the of the day my opinion does not matter it only thing that matters is you love it and it makes you happy (a feeling which I share) (๑•ㅂ•)و✧
Yeah sometimes the art style is a bit off
I like this story so far but I really hope it's one of those mangas where the art gets better or at least improves a little later on