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no, it's messy at least, with a lot of explanations and I believe some inaccurate traductions. At some points, the plot was so badly written that I just skipped it
I think, it is also because this kind of plot needs a lot more chapters for readers to grasp it.
Hmm... After reading it, I only think about what the hell did I just read ╮(￣▽￣)╭ like srsly... wth is this Σ( ￣□￣||)... am I the only one?