Let's be real. The plot is trash in general, and we know it. There is like no development in it. No rise and fall. Nothing that really hooks us in, leaves us on a cliffhanger, where it makes us wanting more. The development is either too slow and boring, Or too fast and there's basically no development that contributes to the plot to makes it intresting. Period
Let's be real. The plot is trash in general, and we know it. There is like no development in it. No rise and fall. Nothing that really hooks us in, leaves us on a cliffhanger, where it makes us wanting more. The development is either too slow and boring, Or too fast and with no development that contributes to the plot to makes it intresting. Period
Very true. I guess as someone who has dabbled in writing I. Keep readying because I know how potential the story could have but I'm leaving myself very flustered because to me it feels like the writer is putting very little effort.
So this story make a big deal out of how important reproduction is. They make to emphasize on her period so much. I feel as though the "mating" should be more detailed as well. This is just because we'd all like it either lol. It's a huge deal I feel like a more could have been with it. Also the laying of the eggs is another huge deal and I feel like a little more could have been done there and when selected meets the hatchlings. She made a huge deal about how she'd freak about having snake kids and when she meets them she accepts them. They hiss at her and Curtis picks her up to help but that's it. I feel like there could have been a huge family reunion scene there (especially sense she's been away from curtis and the eggs all winter).
Just my personal thought and what I would have done given the main plot of the story.