The ending didn't feel natural, like did the others just stand there watching the whole thing? Would have been better if it was done privately cuz to me it just came off as standoffish and the theatrics of lin hang ge as cruel. BTW, the "sex scene" extra art is so CLEVER, the author keeps it PG while giving us fanservice!!! 8/10. Good read, would reread. Good in most parts except ending. (▰˘◡˘▰)
Oh, totally agree with you about the ending! Actually, can't find the right words about what it looked like (too much like a fairytale probably?) , but agree with both my hands. But still I've given 5 stars for the story and style, it was fun to read.
The ending didn't feel natural, like did the others just stand there watching the whole thing? Would have been better if it was done privately cuz to me it just came off as standoffish and the theatrics of lin hang ge as cruel.
BTW, the "sex scene" extra art is so CLEVER, the author keeps it PG while giving us fanservice!!!
8/10. Good read, would reread. Good in most parts except ending. (▰˘◡˘▰)