Responses
"Bokura ga Koi wo Ushinau Riyuu", "Blue! Blue! Blue!", "Walk on water" (not finished yet. The art is really good) and "love nest" are the only one I can come up with right now. I love all of them. I think they are pretty realistic, maybe not all the time, but at least they don't have that many cliche moments.
I somehow really wanted the uke to feel bad while sex (he did almost hurl) or to heavily reject him after. So that the seme feels bad for what he did. I mean a simple sorry before doing it just doesn't cut it. If you know it's bad don't do it.
It seems I've read too many realistic yaoi lately. Yaoi cliches seem to not be my cup of tea anymore.