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yup. same problem. i don't feel literally anything from reading this. i feel like I'm skimming through he story and I'm not- I'm reading everything
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yup. same problem. i don't feel literally anything from reading this. i feel like I'm skimming through he story and I'm not- I'm reading everything
No character development, there's no real reason he's becoming strong. There's no clear goal or thing he wants to protect. And the pple who died for him, well.. I don't feel emotional attachment towards them at all. No personality, bland 1D characters.