There are times when I find in some yaoi’s they add a word that shouldn’t be in there....

Foxydemon911 June 21, 2020 11:01 pm

There are times when I find in some yaoi’s they add a word that shouldn’t be in there. Just asking if anyone other then me catch that too? I mean in chapter 3 they do that I send the link and see if you guys see it too
http://www.mangago.zone/read-manga/becoming_the_librarian_s_pet/uu/iur_chapter-3/pg-16/
If not I be happy to tell you the extra word

Responses
    emma June 26, 2020 6:27 pm

    where?

    Foxydemon911 June 26, 2020 6:53 pm
    where? emma

    If you read it carefully you see the extra word

    PotatoFujoshi June 30, 2020 8:25 pm

    Are you talking about........
    I want 'to' him to know it....?

    PotatoFujoshi June 30, 2020 8:26 pm
    Are you talking about........I want 'to' him to know it....? PotatoFujoshi

    Hear*****

    Foxydemon911 June 30, 2020 10:02 pm
    Hear***** PotatoFujoshi

    Yes you don’t have to add hear you can just say
    I want him to know it

    Foxydemon911 June 30, 2020 10:03 pm
    Hear***** PotatoFujoshi

    Also if you add hear it still doesn’t make sense
    Just take out one of the to and it’s find

    PotatoFujoshi July 1, 2020 6:22 am
    Also if you add hear it still doesn’t make senseJust take out one of the to and it’s find Foxydemon911

    I actually made a typo..the sentence originally is 'i want to him to hear it' and I wrote 'know it'.

    Foxydemon911 July 1, 2020 3:09 pm
    I actually made a typo..the sentence originally is 'i want to him to hear it' and I wrote 'know it'. PotatoFujoshi

    Still doesn’t sound right

    PotatoFujoshi July 1, 2020 6:19 pm
    Still doesn’t sound right Foxydemon911

    Yea. 'I want him to know it' sounds better

    Foxydemon911 July 1, 2020 6:45 pm
    Yea. 'I want him to know it' sounds better PotatoFujoshi

    Agree