Agreed. The backstory/foundation was pretty good, but the forward-moving execution is poor. The "struggle" isn't compelling. At this rate, I'd rather see the previous timeline story, where she loses everything and has to earn it back the normal badass way. They didn't even give us a good romantic plotline, he already mysteriously loves her? Wasn't that her shtick? Please, give us SOMETHING to actually worry about and root for! Its like watching a tone-deaf stranger paid to sing a song you like. You relate to what they're trying to do, but otherwise it's kinda awkward and you just want to hear it done right so you can forget.... sorry, ramble.
Agree... I span of 5 chapters they became the most powerful magician, restored her land to the full power and made it impeccable fort and Kian is absolutely in love with her, suddenly not interested anymore in his payment and she is also in love with him. I mean, okay there is that scene with the prince, but it didn't really show some sort of a threat or that we will see them actually work on either themselves, their relationship or restoring the land's glory - it was just like Wooosh! Done! (╯°Д °)╯╧╧
But I guess I will continue to read it just to see the ending and maybe some plot, unless it continues like this and it really annoys me before that and I drop it.
Anyone else feels this is bit rushed? And the relationship of Priscilla and Kian is changing from panel to panel.
Like wut? So much happened in such a short time, not really seeing some relationship nor character development
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