Yeah I can definitely write a better plot than this shit in my opinion. I don’t mean to be rude. The plot here is just so bland to me. I mean good job for the author since it is their first work but they can definitely improve in the future.
Yeah I can definitely write a better plot than this shit in my opinion. I don’t mean to be rude. The plot here is just so bland to me. I mean good job for the author since it is their first work but they can ... Esther
Agree agree agree. Like c'mon, with tons of bl out there, this plot is so below average. The art is good but still can't compensate for the plot. I literally have no feelings whatsoever reading this, didn't even bother have it saved for updates
I hate to say it but the plot is trash. Like it was meh there was really no flavor. I cringed on most of the parts.